By Viridian
Reviews
Graup posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 5:15pm
I enjoyed this installment.
I am wondering how you plan to use Percy. Will he be the Ministry connection that hurts Harry?
Will Percy turn in Sirius?
I imagine the fact that Harry messed with time will come out in the open eventually, and I look forward to how you deliver that part of the story.
Hot48cricket posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 4:22pm
Oh, this was such a good chapter!!! Who's going to rescue Harry & Sirius?????
Update soon, please!
Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 4:14pm
Oh man, you just made my whole evening. I'm very curious about Mrs. Longbottom. I can definitely see her disapproving of Luna, but to actually prevent Neville from visiting his friends because of it is rather extreme. I'm also interested to see how Mrs. Weasley will deal with Harry and Ginny, knowing that in some ways Harry is WAY older than her. Thank you very much for another wonderful chapter!
Kail posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 3:55pm
Wasn't sure if you were going to have the other Weasleys finish their training in time for third year, but it does make sense in one respect: as the twins are older and occustumed to an almost leglimancy-like communication style, concealing that would be very easy. Percy, older still and more experienced with the way magic can be bent, would have also had an easier time at it. Arthur and Molly don't really need explaining; both are Order members, and have been shown to be quite skilled in their own right.
Ah, dementors. Come here, let me introduce you to my Patronus, Prongs. Prongs...sic 'em.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 3:52pm
Heh, this is going to get interesting. I wonder how the Dementors are going to take to getting surprised by a Patronus? It could get rather interesting, to say the least. I like the way the divergences are starting to build up now, it'll be rather interesting to see just how far things go in the next couple years of story time.
CootiePatootie posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 3:03pm
WHAT??!!??!!
You do this every time. ARGHHHH. Sheesh. Another great update, but you just had to go and end it with a heart attack, didn't ya? ;-)
Siriusly, er, Seriously...I'm glad Harry finally got to tell his family about the possible future/timeline split and his memories. It is interesting, especially the bit about the alternate timeline because his memories have not changed. I wonder though, would his memories change? As you said, Hermione can have that one.
I'm presuming the 'hooded, cloaked figures' are Dementors, not DEs, right? We don't have active DEs in this story yet, right?
Poor Neville. I can just imagine Gran Longbottom trying to set him a match. That's just too funny. Really, though, I would not have put her in the snobby category of shunning the Weasleys, Harry, and Luna.
Will Harry & Co have more interaction with the Granger's friend the martial arts teacher? (sorry I can't remember his name just this moment)
Anyway, great update as always.
Cheers,
Cassie
Aberbadger posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 2:56pm
You are EVIL!!!!!
jayley posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 2:49pm
i reviewed this already...but really good! did u draw that anime picture?
malexandria posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 2:44pm
really good installment, I was a little leery at first because of all the adult warnings, I feered this was going to somehow turn into smut, but it didn't. keep up the good work.
Nylorac posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 1:42pm
Woohoo! The new chapter's up!
I really love this story. I find it fascinating to see how much everyone is changing from how they were, yet still remain so much themselves. I have read other stories that don't do nearly so good a job at this.
Before this chapter, I had never really considered that Neville's grandmother might be so pureblood obsessed, but it does make sense. In canon we just don't see that much of her, and most authors sort of just ignore her.
I think the "You’re making up for a past life of sin and debauchery" line is great. It was a great bit of humor after the seriousness of the previous conversation.
Now that this is updated, I have no more excuses to avoid doing my paper. *sigh*
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 1:38pm
A most wonderful chapter. I hope things work out and harry is able to avoid any serious trouble. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing.
'Mione
Mickey posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 1:38pm
Very nice, glad Neville got some tutoring even if he couldn't join the rest of the group. Based on the final scene I take it someone figured out that Sirus is an Animagous and directed the Dementors accordingly.
The Unicorn
Haeton posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 1:01pm
Man after such a wicked cliff-hanger I sure hope the next chapter comes quickly but as always never sacrifice quality for speed. Thanks again for the hard work you put into each chapter.
david abbey1 posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 12:46pm
aarrggghh!!
a cliffy!! you rat!! how will harry possibly get out of this one? will serious escape the embrace of the dementors? will we have to wait another month to find out? don't leave harry like this!!
nancy in chicago posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 12:32pm
As always, I love your story! When will Remus know the secret? Or is he not in the 'list' in the current timeline?
nancy in chicago
Davideg posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 12:03pm
wow that was a fantastic chapter please update agin soon
ichtys posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 11:52am
Very nice chapter, but you are a cheater. Ending such a great chapter in a cliffhanger!!!.
Thanks for sharing
Regards Ichtys
artiel8857 posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 11:26am
Awesome! Please get the next chapter up soon!
Jonathan posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 11:15am
Excellent chapter.
Fate posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 5:31pm