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Shadowrose7 posted a comment on Friday 14th December 2012 10:49pm

I must say I Love this Story I had thought that it was forgotten. I started following this series in 2008. I cannot say how thrilled I am that you are continuing with this story. I have read hundreds if not thousands of HP fics. This is hands down the best Time fic I have ever read. It's well thought out it doesn’t over whelm the reader but it keeps you enthralled. I will be waiting with baited breath to read more. Thank you for writing.


dianaanne posted a comment on Sunday 9th December 2012 9:43pm

I really like this story and hope you finish it! Any ideas as to when you might have time to update?

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Wednesday 5th December 2012 11:50am

Good show on the defeat of the Dementors. Nice to see Ron get a bit of what Harry has had to deal with since his reappearance to the Wizarding world. Thanks for sharing!

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th November 2012 7:50pm

Fantastic! I like the way you handled this.

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th November 2012 7:38pm

Excellent! I do like this story. I am glad Harry shared the monies from the basilisk.

loretta537 posted a comment on Monday 26th November 2012 6:42am

this is a great story! i cant wait to see what will happen next

Patches posted a comment on Monday 19th November 2012 5:25am

Hey! I'm one of those nasty Yanks, Thank you very much! Not really a problem. I just had to stand up for the "colonists". We haven't done so bad. I live on the Pacific side. It's nice to read about the "Old Country". Finally Harry got his secrets off his chest. I'm glad everyone stood by him. Of course Ron got upset but so did everyone else. Ron gets mad and then he thinks. I like the way things change but are similar. It helps keep Harry on his toes. I'm glad Dumbledore finally got rid of Snape. That was excellent. Dumbledore finally came through and got rid of the Malfoy's. I loved what McGonagal had to say about Draco being implicated in the attempted deaths of two students. That pretty well nailed it down. Freeing Dobby was icing on the cake. I'm glad Harry and Ginny had a private conversation. That had to be done and I like the way it turned out. So was Harry! Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 18th November 2012 5:10pm

Things are really moving along. I'm so glad that Harry made friends with Melissa Bulstrode. I'm sure Ginny is a little apprehensive about Cho kissing Harry on the cheek when she thanked him after the DA meeting. It is looking good that he is making friends with McGonagal. Of course he wanted to make contact with Slughorn so that worked well. It is good that so many teachers are helping the DA now. I can understand that Harry expected Snape to attack him in some way at his detention but it looks like he set up an ambush instead. I hope Harry isn't permanently injured. It would ruin the story. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. pms

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 15th November 2012 6:02pm

This is really good. I'm glad that Molly is taking care of Sirius. He will get well so much better than he would otherwise. I really like the pranks. The fact that Ginny told Harry the truth of the poem and who sent it to him was really good. That makes Harry feel better and Ginny is showing to be more like the Ginny he knew before. The fact that Percy stood up for what was right and took points from Draco was excellent. The fact that he told Ron he would have taken points from Gryffindor was great. He let Ron know he wouldn't put up with wrong doing from anyone. The revenge on the twins was great. I'm so glad that Melissa took it the way she did. In the process Harry made a new friend. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 15th November 2012 3:49pm

This is such a great story. I am really enjoying reading it again. I finally got to this point. This is such a great chapter. I love the way Harry has reacted to his friends and "family" are treating him this Christmas Holiday. The fact that he has given Arthur and Molly the Occlumency book and gave them a magical oath was a huge deal. I'm glad Arthur and Molly are taking it as well as they are. I'm also glad that he is trying to help Percy not become too angry at his siblings such as Ron beating him at chess. Harry's praise of Percy's performance did a lot to help Percy lose more graciously. I love the way that Harry found Sirius. That was great and Arthur's acceptance of Sirius was excellent. I look forward to more of this story and the chapters I haven't read yet. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 11th November 2012 3:16am

Dear Viridian, I love this story. It has been a while since you updated so I am rereading the story to catch up with where you have ended before. That is not a complaint. Just a fact that I'm getting old and can't remember all the different fan fic plots I have read. I'm on pate 597 right now and the end of this chapter is over 1300 pages. I will review as I go along so don't put me on your bad list. Thanks for understanding. Patches

Miri posted a comment on Sunday 4th November 2012 10:42pm

Wait a minute-- on the one day that the Dementors will be able to attack Hogwarts (if the Muggle attack succeeds ) Slughorn calls an "all house" meeting for the Slytherins so that no one from that House is present for the attack? Very interesting timing. Is Slughorn not what he seems? Is he connected with the group Millicent mentioned in the last chapter, the group of purebloods that were "aligning their interests"? Why do I get the feeling that Voldemort may wind up being almost (but not completely ) irrelevent in this timeline and that Harry and company's biggest problem will come from a completely unexpected direction and they will find themselves dealing with a dangerous conspiracy of Purebloods? Ones willing to sacrifince magical children as well as Muggle borns to Dementors? Nasty!

Also, Harry's "pain in the chest" when using his power is worrisome. Are his 2 cores of power not merging well?

Not what I was expecting after the long wait but very interesting>

lwj2 posted a comment on Thursday 1st November 2012 9:22pm

Nicely done, and for what it's worth, using PIRA as a stalking-horse makes sense, particularly in the time-frame, at least in my opinion.

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

aragorn2008 posted a comment on Wednesday 31st October 2012 9:59pm

Thank you very much for revisiting this story. I am an avid fanfic reader and feel that this is one of best stories in the HP universe. I really hope you are able to find enough time to complete this.

Rexnos posted a comment on Sunday 28th October 2012 11:01pm

I won't bother being surprised there's an update as I'm sure every other reviewer has done it for me.

That was pretty epic, and I don't use that word lightly. We haven't really seen Harry and the gang really get into the fray in quite some time. We all know they're miles more competent than their canon counterparts, but this really shows it. Also, I don't think I've ever seen a dementor stabbed to death before.

Anyway, always a joy to see more writing from you. It's been a while since I've reread this story and now is probably as good a time as any. I always love reading the transformation Harry undergoes throughout the story and the turns his friends take away from their canon counterparts. This is easily one of my favorite fan fics.



Hihavaniceda posted a comment on Saturday 27th October 2012 11:11pm

Good one (chapter that is).

Where can I change my email contact details? I am just about to close the account that you sent the link of the update, and I want to stay in the loop even if it is a year or two beteen chapters.

Best idea ever that I have read for fan fiction.

All the best,


Mistress.Poe posted a comment on Thursday 25th October 2012 11:56pm

Wow, what a way for me to rejoin HP fandom! In four days I have devoured every chapter and l loved every word of it! Am eagerly anticipating the next update, though I noticed that it had been nearly 3 years between the last update and the chapter previous...I don't know if I can wait that long, though it will definitely be worth it.

Love this, keep it up and I can't wait for more x

GBTtown posted a comment on Wednesday 24th October 2012 8:02pm

great update, I like Ginny's cynicism concerning the future.

DrT posted a comment on Wednesday 24th October 2012 4:05pm

Interesting outcome, and Ron gets what he wanted throughout most of canon!

Patrick Rice posted a comment on Wednesday 24th October 2012 6:29am

Good Chapter. Its great to have you back.

As always it was well written, and your descritions were spot on, as to level of detail. I also enjoy your dialogue.

I will be interesting to see how Ron deals with his new fame, after all his jelousy of Harry, as described in canon, how both sides respond to the outcome of the batle.