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Vrzepka posted a comment on Friday 15th February 2019 2:58pm

Flooed not floored

Vrzepka posted a comment on Friday 15th February 2019 12:32pm

Tough kid old hp

Vrzepka posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2019 11:21pm

Very interesting

Vrzepka posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2019 7:14pm

Best defense is strong offense

Vrzepka posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2019 5:33pm

Ssssssssssss

Vrzepka posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2019 5:03pm

Assassinate

Vrzepka posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2019 3:56pm

Tough to read scaffold abuse

Vrzepka posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2019 3:45pm

Very good still reading

Vrzepka posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2019 3:02pm

Good read fun

Vrzepka posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2019 2:10pm

Still fine and a fun read

Vrzepka posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2019 12:19pm

Good stuff hindsight is 20/20

Sterling posted a comment on Saturday 30th June 2018 3:21pm

This is one of the best stories on this site. It looks to be abandoned, which is a shame. In any case, thanks for sharing a great story with us. I hope that one day you will take it back up.

Sinfield4 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2018 5:21pm

When is there more chapters please

Sinfield4 posted a comment on Thursday 1st February 2018 5:02pm

I am loving the story,At last thay know :)

Sinfield4 posted a comment on Wednesday 31st January 2018 10:58am

Really getting in to thus story

HamiltonH posted a comment on Thursday 14th December 2017 2:31am

I have no idea how I managed *not* to read this story for so long, despite seeing it mentioned all over the HP fanfic world as recommended, or rather *required* reading..... All I can say is “my loss”. I really hope you will at some point continue with it; after all you promised in one of your ANs that if for some reason you would have to abandon it, and us, you would at least leave us your notes and outlines, and those haven’t been published yet :-).

Jmcmutt posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2017 9:52pm

Wonderful chapter

Ilonwy posted a comment on Sunday 11th June 2017 8:41pm

Dear Viridian,

This is my favorite fanfiction ever. Anytime I meet a new Harry Potter fan I suggest that they read this. This must be my fifth or sixth re-read. I cannot wait for this story to continue.

I do have a suggestion, should you ever go back and edit.

Wool yarn doesn't burn. Trust me; I work in the textiles industry. Acyrlic yarn (the most common synthetic substitute for wool) will only melt. Cotton could burn, but it is highly irregular to use cotton in knitting, unless you intend the item to be summer weight (not Weasley sweater material). I understand that this is magic we are talking about, but maybe she could set her knitting pattern on fire or the bamboo knitting needles on fire. It is physically impossible for wool to burn. It just shrivels a bit. That is why it has been traditionally used for fire blankets and rugs on hearths.

I hope that you are recovering well from your health issues.

Please keep writing.

Thank you.

mysuv1 posted a comment on Saturday 18th February 2017 3:30am

Please continue

april0108 posted a comment on Sunday 28th August 2016 10:10pm

Enjoying the story!