Martionmanswife posted a comment on Sunday 3rd September 2006 3:34pm

I am really enjoying this story. it is very good.

Renzo7 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd September 2006 1:36pm

that's an evil cliffhanger! still great work though, keep it up.

Asad posted a comment on Sunday 3rd September 2006 6:02am

Very bad cliffie....

The events are already changing. This will make for an interesting story for third year though I might get headaches from sorting through the timelines and events... ;)

Ron posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 2:59pm

YAY!!!!! I was about to give up on this one. Please keep the updates coming!

Knight_Hax0r posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 1:10pm

That Cliff Hanger brings to mind an image of Harry facing Dementors and a thought bubble comming out of his head and the only word in it is "BUGGER!" or some other choice curse words! Atleast Sirius makes it to Harry before the Dementors catch up, however it comes off as a hellaicous battle is about to ensue (or I can only hope!).

I love this story and as with any good story its extremely well written and flows wonderfully.

Don't change the 'Magic' as it were and keep 'em coming!

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 11:20am

What a evil time for a cliffy. Time for Prongs to show up and save the day.

Update soon.
MPF

tombeam posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 9:52am

TOTALLY FRAKING AWESOME

Prince Charon posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 6:58am

Interesting. Very, very interesting.

Thank you for the update.

Please don't leave us hanging over this cliff for to long

Nogoalielikeme posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 5:07am

stupid dementors.

LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 4:29am

What, you don't the cliffhanger in this chapter isn't worthy of some death threats?

OMFG!

Just because the foam isn't necessarily an indication doesn't mean Sirius isn't rabid. He's a VERY mangy dog. :)

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 4:12am

Ron has *definitely* changed....for the *different*. He's applying his chess thinking to the outside world (embarrassing not only the twins, but *Percy* into extra Defense lessons?), but proving that he *definitely* has Harry's back (yes, I think the twins are the ones that tried to test Ron's resolve....and lost, and lost badly). *This* Ron has no back-up in him at all....not even from his mum and dad (notice that Ron didn't back down from the chewing-out he got from Arthur). Definitely a different Ron. The changes are somewhat more diffused through the rest of the Weasleys...but with Ron, they are decidedly obvious.

What the heck is going on with Augusta Longbottom? I'd say it's far more than her simple disapproval of Neville's choice of girlfriend. Is there a Riddle Connection? (Not far-fetched at all; remember, Frank and Alice Longbottom were a royal pain in the rear for the Death Eaters during the first campaign, and the DEs *do* hold grudges.)

Jane Average posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 3:11am

You're an evil, evil man ;) I feel guilty leaving reviews that don't say what I like, only what I'm curious about. Does liking that you've made me so insanely curious count? ;) I'm dying to know what Mrs. Longbottom has against Luna. And of course this Dementor thing. *ponders* do the wards affect them at all?
Other than that... well, your usual gift with turns of phrase was very active this chapter :)
I do have one question. He said that he wouldn't have to see anyone that day that he had to keep secrets from. What about Remus?

Sophophobia posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 2:51am

Eep! Cliff hanger! You're so evil... Please update soon. :)

-Sopho

C. Harris posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 2:39am

Oh wow. That was pretty awesome. I can't wait to see what you have planned next!

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 12:57am

Wow! Intense chapter. Regarding Neville's grandmother... though she is firmly on the side of the 'Light', she is a formidable old women who has extremily high standards. I can see how, from her rather limited point of view, Luna would not be considered an appropriate wife for a young man of her Nevilles social station. Though I think it rather ridiculous to make such a fuss out of any relationship her barely 13 year old grandson may fancy for himself.

I like the responses from the Weasley's regarding the truth about Harry's life, though Mrs. Weasleys continued belief in Dumbledore's benevolence is a bit worrisome. I do look forward to Snapes and Dumbledore's reactions when they realize that ALL local Weasley's are of sound mind... so to speak.

Nice cliffie, by the way. At least this time when Harry uses his wand to defend himself against Dementors it will be with the legal right to do so! I hope he can get Sirius behind the wards in time and that Sirius is not found by any Aurors who may be tracking the movements of the Dementors.

Arkeus posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 12:49am

Damn, i thought Sirius hd been kissedbefore reading your an.
I refer this way. aren't they going to be surprised by his patronus ::p

Ken Warner posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 10:13pm

an excellent and very enjoyable chapter - Wow - you managed to pack a whole lot of story into a relatively small space while retaining all the emotions, dialogue and internal consistency one could possibly desire - bravo

Still worry alot about revealing thing to Dumbledore - there is one trap you have left gaping

Thanks and anxiously awaiting the nest installment - warmest regards

Lira posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 8:36pm

Brilliant chapter! Love the Weasleys' reactions to the revelations! :) *sighs* I hope Mrs Longbottom will relent soon! And to leave it hanging here! Meanie! ;) Hope you have time to update again soon! :)

Patches posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 7:48pm

What a great chapter. This is a really good update. I'm glad Harry was able to tell all the Weaseley's about his story. I just hope Molly doesn't spill the beans to Dumbledore. It looks like Sirius has brought Dementors to the Burrow. I hope Harry can perform a Patronus! It looks like he is going to need it.
I glad Ginny is able to be supportive of Harry
and that she can point out his mistakes! Thanks for the timely update. I really like it when they come on a regular basis. pms

Lufio posted a comment on Friday 1st September 2006 6:19pm

Oooo, dementors! Nice bit of a cliffhanger. How positively evil of you. ^_^

The bit with Neville's Gran doing some matchmaking during the summer was a funny twist of a red herring. Kudos for that.