By Viridian
Reviews
Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Thursday 30th October 2008 10:48pm
Another great chapter..
Keep up the great work whenever possible and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
This story is one of my favourites and I can't wait for the next update, so please update as soon as you can.
Minerva Granger posted a comment on Monday 27th October 2008 12:10pm
Fantastic new chapter! I can't wait for the next year!
rune1806 posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2008 5:15pm
A very good interesting update, I loved the interaction with Harry and Mr. Granger. The party at the end was nice and Ron asking for a broom was a good laugh. The way you are writing Harry and Ginny is very well done, not having 12 and 13 year olds in the making out is much more real than the way some writers handle it.
Rick D Gale posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2008 1:23pm
I had waited a long time for this story to update, and I'm glad you did. I still had to read it from the beginning again to make sure everything made sense.
You have another great chapter here. I can't wait to see how their little 'harvesting' trip turns out.
I hope Harry got enough venom to take care of the 'gift's' Sirus brought back for his birthday. By the way, which Horcurx's did Sirus get (besides the cup and the locket), and which one's does he still have to get?
I look forward to your next update, and will go to your group site to see how the update is going.
rdgale
dimriver posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2008 12:54am
He has already seen he Uncle becoming abusive, it would have been reasonable for him to anticipate this, but it's also reasonable for him to expect things to go like they did before. Great story.
dimriver posted a comment on Saturday 25th October 2008 11:04pm
So why did Harry not kill Snape, preserving the time line?
dimriver posted a comment on Saturday 25th October 2008 1:52pm
A very nice start, I like how the magic was thought out.
Vigdis posted a comment on Friday 24th October 2008 7:44am
I'm so happy to see a new chapter. I love the way you are handling Harry's adaptations. I look forward to seeing more of how he changes the future.
Ohhhdear posted a comment on Friday 24th October 2008 4:00am
I'm so thrilled you've updated and haven't forgotten this wonderful tale. Please thank your Muse!
csktech posted a comment on Thursday 23rd October 2008 4:44am
Matt,
I love this story, in fact its one of my favorites and I eagerly look foward to your updates.
Please Keep working on it as much as life lets you.
The great thing is I have to reread all of it each time you post. Not a bad way to spend an afternoon.
Thanks so much for the creativity and hard work.
Kyle
Crys posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd October 2008 2:27am
RaEBNC
Lord Matrix posted a comment on Tuesday 21st October 2008 9:26pm
Well done Matt this is another good chapter with awsome story develpment. Waiting with baited breath to see what will come next from your pen.
Carol Layland posted a comment on Tuesday 21st October 2008 12:18pm
What a lovely story. Harry returns in time and in trying to change the inevitable learns much. It is very well written in my very humble school teacher's opinion and I enjoyed every word written up to this chapter's end. I look forward to reading the next posting whenever you get it up.
Lynn Terald posted a comment on Tuesday 21st October 2008 9:21am
That was quite the chapter and well worth the wait. I just hope that the wait won't be so far and few between this time around.
Thanks for the update and keep up the good work.
Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Tuesday 21st October 2008 8:26am
Just rereading this. I think that maybe the thing that touches me most about this story is the memories you casually slip in about Harry's memories of how the people he cares about died in prior times. I don't think I'd noticed the one about Shacklebolt before. Good job.
lap10 posted a comment on Tuesday 21st October 2008 6:30am
New NoFP!! A wonderful pick-me-up for a dreary Tuesday, great chapter.
Puck1 posted a comment on Tuesday 21st October 2008 5:17am
Nice work, Viridian. It's a little different then what I was expecting, but you've done great work with this fic.
yongmoon posted a comment on Tuesday 21st October 2008 4:31am
Great stuff as always. Eagerly waiting for your next update. Keep up the good work!
joeBob posted a comment on Monday 20th October 2008 10:32pm
Thanks for the update.
tugger55 posted a comment on Saturday 1st November 2008 4:46am