Team 8
First Blood
By Viridian
Reviews
Jamey posted a comment on Wednesday 26th July 2006 12:57pm for First Blood
I think Hinabi needs it pointed out to her that Hinata did *NOT* in fact fall first - if Hinabi hadn't fallen in the first battle, she wouldn't have been kidnapped.
Stupid bint.
Bobboky posted a comment on Wednesday 26th July 2006 12:37pm for First Blood
very much in the way of being excellent
William Fowler posted a comment on Wednesday 26th July 2006 12:35pm for First Blood
Wonderful chapter, and I like the way they saw the fourth when looking at Naruto. Boy, Hiashi is a b--tard isn't he. Someone seriously need to get whatever is crammed up his backside and dispose of it.
Oh, and I love Miss Crimson Sunset, the woman just CARES so much that it makes ME feel in a good mood. :D
In general, this was a great chapter, that I seriously enjoyed taking the time to read, of course, I could have done with some Hiashi bashing, and some Naruto-sticking-up-for-the-underdog, but that doesn't even happen in the manga until the Chuunin Exam.
Which, by the way, I can't wait for your version of.
Alright, is this review meaty enough for ya?
Just kidding, thanks for the update, and have a great night!
William
Brandon West posted a comment on Wednesday 26th July 2006 12:30pm for First Blood
As usual, very good.
It's probably a good thing that Naruto here doesn't know the Rasengan or Chidori, as he was already pissed enough to put a fist through the steel skin guy. With an actual chakra attack, there probably wouldn't have been big enough pieces to even know there was a ninja there.
Also, interesting techniques you're coming up with. How are you translating them into Japanese, or are they techniques that I just haven't run across because I'm not completely up to date with the manga/anime.
It was fun to watch Shino get startled as well, seeing him receive a bit of help that he'd never expected. Since his character is so under-developed in canon, you're bringing him and his whole clan along very well.
Hmm, was this meaty enough to motivate you? :)
Anxiously awaiting the next update.
Davideg posted a comment on Wednesday 26th July 2006 1:17pm for First Blood