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Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Thursday 20th January 2011 9:55pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

Wow, I've been waiting for this chapter for a while, and I have to say that the wait was definitely worth it. You've delivered a quite powerful depiction of just how strongly Kurenai has affected her team, and shown how tight a team bond has developed, as seen from their interactions both inside and outside the team. Thanks for sharing this with us, and I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens next.

stormmaster posted a comment on Thursday 20th January 2011 8:47pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

Holy cow. I had been waiting to see how you would wrap things up after Kurenai's death, and how things would be resolved with her genin. The funeral scene is incredibly moving, and well written. I didn't expect Kakashi and Asuma to act as they did, but it makes sense.

I look forward to reading how the conflict between Hinata and her father pans out, and how the team continues their training.

Well done!