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Bruddajak posted a comment on Tuesday 19th March 2013 6:31am for A Pyrrhic Victory

So basically this turned into crap, and the backlash was so bad that it was abandoned. Bitch move that.

Nights Silhoutte posted a comment on Tuesday 5th February 2013 4:30pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

A damned good story to date, I have spent the last two days spending every spare minute I have (and a fair few I did not have) to get to this point. I cannot wait to see how the rest of the story develops. Keep it up.

huskerfan posted a comment on Friday 28th December 2012 4:38am for A Pyrrhic Victory

Really great fic, early on in the first chapter I realized I had already read this at some point in time on fanfiction.net but it is such a great story that I decided to reread it. I really hope you are planning on continuing this story at some point in the near future and updating.

traviswj posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2012 8:12am for A Pyrrhic Victory

An awesome story, I hope you update it one day.

Immortalitis posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 10:19am for A Pyrrhic Victory

Epic. Quite honestly, this is truly incredible. I have never before read such a realistic Naruto fanfic.

His strength is believable, but that's not what grips you. It's the character development. Going from a moronic prankster to a Chuunin-level Genin and showing all the emotional development quite honestly leaves me awed and humbled.

Please update soon, because I crave to read more. The fallout and everything else.

Regards
Immo

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Thursday 8th September 2011 7:39pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

This is turning out to be a very well written and thought out story and can't wait to read the rest.

tugger55 posted a comment on Tuesday 6th September 2011 4:39pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

after reading this story for the 100th time i really want to see team 8
become stronger and start kicking ass so plese hurry with the next chapter

Harry James posted a comment on Thursday 16th June 2011 8:00pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

Will he ever learn the summoning technique? i would hate for him to skip learning sage mode. its also something his father did.

Harry James posted a comment on Thursday 16th June 2011 8:00pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

Will he ever learn the summoning technique? i would hate for him to skip learning sage mode.

jafo2008 posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd March 2011 3:05pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Zevi posted a comment on Tuesday 25th January 2011 3:58pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

Thank you for continuing this story.

Robert71 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd January 2011 11:07pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

not a bad chapter.... it was better than te last one... i still have a problem with how out of character you write some of the characters except for hinata you seem to write every female charater the same and everyone is always angry ready to kill someone... its slightly annoying since its so predictable how everyone will react... and the hyuga a hugely taken out of character, hinata is the only nice one of the bunch? of a whole clan shes the nice one not spoile and because of that shes beat by her father... the same father that loves her so much he killed a cloud ninja without hesitation to save her... really? i mean c'mon character depth is needed to establish why they are that way not just becuase "theyre hyuga's, and thats how they act" your chapters are slightly losing more and more everytime i read them, they fail to grasp me like they used to chakra pulse is rediculous its almost straight out of force unleashed... naruto needs to NOT use that jutsu as it is a waste of chakra... i like the story as a whole (minus a few things here and there that you have taken liberties on) and i liked the beginning of it but its almost going nowhere... for goodness sake hinata is a senory ninja and shes being sold into slavery doing medical work for tsunade thats ridiculous... shino is scared of toads cuz theyll eat his bugs? he is a master of espionage, its like youre youre not taking anyone seriously as a ninja you should brush up on the manga or storyline somewhere and tweak your original idea a bit... sorry this seems so random

alec_potter posted a comment on Friday 21st January 2011 2:31pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

Nice chapter....very touching.

Rexnos posted a comment on Friday 21st January 2011 6:19am for A Pyrrhic Victory

I'll admit, I was really worried with the death of Kurenai. She really was the mouthpiece of the story. It undoubtedly will change the story not simply due to its impact on the characters, but also because of the different way you will have to present everything. I thought such a huge change would make this story less thoughtful and less enjoyable.

With this chapter I'll freely admit I was wrong. Kurenai dying still sucks, but your story's tone and characters are still the same. I was surprised to see Naruto so deadened at first, but his emotional catharsis there at the end was completely fitting. Seeing Hinata not give a care what her father thought was satisfying as well.

In any case, I'm looking forward to new chapters on this one again. I'm curious whether you're going to undertake a few years fast-forward or not at this point. I feel like Naruto and company could do with a few years, but I don't see the trio wanting to leave each other, especially no time in the near future.

Later,
Rex

Gena posted a comment on Friday 21st January 2011 2:02am for A Pyrrhic Victory

great chapter loved it... made me almost cry

Immortalitis posted a comment on Friday 21st January 2011 1:49am for A Pyrrhic Victory

Fantastic! A truly amazing chapter and well worth the wait. Very heart-warming at times and Naruto's intelligence and strength is truly believable.

I hope you update soon! :D

liquidfyre posted a comment on Thursday 20th January 2011 11:52pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

Errrr meant to say that i could get the book with your story in it.

liquidfyre posted a comment on Thursday 20th January 2011 11:46pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

Damn good update. I am glad you are still writing for us poor people as well, hehe.

Keep up the good work. I am hoping i will be able to get one of your actual books soon.

liquidfyre posted a comment on Thursday 20th January 2011 10:51pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

IS ALIIIIIIIVE

Jason McCulley posted a comment on Thursday 20th January 2011 10:05pm for A Pyrrhic Victory

I'm terrible at reviews. Glad to see another chapter of Team 8. Glad to see the plot progressing. Hope to see more soonish. Love your writing. Keep up the great work!