Team 8
Difficult Preparations
By Viridian
Reviews
Bobboky posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2006 7:09pm for Difficult Preparations
awesome
AK posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2006 6:44pm for Difficult Preparations
Really nice chapter, it has a bit of "short" feeling to it (though it is of decent lengh).
I really like the way you are setting the interactions between the characters, I think this story reads better than your Hp one.
Ed posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2006 6:02pm for Difficult Preparations
Woot!!!! Took a while for this chapter to come out, but it was a good chapter. Interesting Hyuuga Family dynamics you inserted, as well as evidence of Naruto learning manners, etc. Iruka and Kurenai meet!!! Will he replace Mattai? Anyways, good work.
Laterz
-Ed
scott2 posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2006 7:16pm for Difficult Preparations