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april0108 posted a comment on Sunday 28th August 2016 10:10pm for End of Year One...

Enjoying the story!

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Wednesday 10th August 2011 5:31am for End of Year One...

Totally superb! What a difference! Somehow Harry needs to see to it that Sirius gets something though.

mantis posted a comment on Sunday 12th April 2009 6:11am for End of Year One...

Nice cliff-hanger; I wasn't sure until I read your note whether it was just Fred and George (and why the heck would they grab Harry at that moment if they weren't completely certain he'd gotten the Snitch?), or some hostile person, probably Malfoy, had done a summoning charm or something of the sort on his broom to knock it out from under him.

I noticed more subtle hints that Hermione might be more attracted to Harry than Ron in this timeline; on the other hand, Ron's admiration for Hermione is rather more pronounced, too, and Ginny obviously likes Harry a lot already, so maybe it won't be a problem. Harry's observation about "puberty revisited" rang very true; I've thought some about this particular form of time travel fantasy (haven't we all wondered how much better high school could be if we could send all the knowledge of our adult selves back to our pubescent minds?), and that seems like a significant potential problem.

Also interesting that you used the phrase "greater good" in connection with Dumbledore's keeping secrets, given what that phrase meant to him in DH. Dumbledore, of all people, should be wary of letting the ends justify the means in pursuit of a "greater good," but we didn't really know him until Book 7.

bookaholic_au posted a comment on Wednesday 25th June 2008 8:17pm for End of Year One...

Americanisms:

Romania = Rumania

Mom = Mum

Jizzle posted a comment on Sunday 2nd March 2008 7:27am for End of Year One...

"“He does have a point, Harry. This would be too good an opportunity for him to pass up,” Hermione” Hermione volunteered." definitely has an extra Hermione.

Hoss posted a comment on Wednesday 28th November 2007 12:07pm for End of Year One...

I have not had much new stuff to read, so I'm glad I came across Kokopelli's mention of this story. What Great Fun. Thanks

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2007 5:19pm for End of Year One...

Very good chapter.

gunny

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 30th October 2006 4:02am for End of Year One...

Just terrific how you had Harry introduce the Peter-factor to Dumbledore.

Your letters between Harry and Ginny were great.

I read ahead for a few chapters to confirm I had not read these - now I'm going back and reviewing quickly for a few.

Cheers!

Rocky235 posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 1:00pm for End of Year One...

"“Is this… urgent, Harry?”"

Hermione is a doll. Actually all your characters well done and likeable. Well, not all are likeable, cough...Snape...cough