Harry Potter and the Nightmares of Futures Past
By Viridian
I think this is brilliant!!
I'm so glad you've written something like this, it's like being able to live the Harry Potter books over again, without the mundanity. At first I thought it would be hard to accept the alternate
reality, but I read one of the chapters a few days ago and I haven't been able to stop thinking about it since.
These stories are perfectly dark, but somehow still capture the right feeling. :)
the boy who lived, dead? ironic isn´t?
Great , it's really a big history you've got, it's about the third time I read it, but i'm not gettin tired of it, that part, you know, the one of the final battle against Voldemort it was mos
likely the best i've heard of, and i think though it was we all wanted, a bloody fight and a great duel between them, though Hermione and Ron's deaths was a low punch i'm at th edge of tears every
time i read about it....
keep doing this great fic.....
oh, by the way, when do you think to update? i'ts jus not fast enough....
cheers...
Hello, it's me, re-reading this again. Thank you for writing it. Hope the next chapter is going well.
Well if this was a 'skill building exercise' it is wolds better than a fic by many other writers who think their skills are already 'built'.
It promises to be an interesting and entertaining fic.
BTW your betas have done a great job too.
A very nice start, I like how the magic was thought out.
"thinks will look better" should be "things will look better."
Just thought I'd mention it since you said you're going through and trying to fix any errors in the story so far.
Very interesting start.
gunny
please help me I have always been able to get to your site but tonight I have trouble.
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>I love your story..............I have just reread it this week I am having trouble getting to your site now please help..
when you sent me the up date there was no direct web page to get to the story.
I have recived two pass words and the site still wont let me in please Help!!!!!!!
Thank You .........Miss Millie
"Like it? Leave a review!"
Like it? Course I like it. Not only is this the best looking of any fan site, but it has the best stories. (They must only let English majors post here as the stories are so well written.)
Excuse my "French," as they say, but all that comes to mind upon completing this chapter is, "Oh, shit!"
Sad, interesting with a small ray of hope. I'm interested in seeing how things change with this start up. Thank you for writing.
pms
I've read all of the story that is available at ff.net now, and I want to apologize for thinking that this might be a cheap knock-off of another story that starts in a similiar vein. It didn't
help my assertion that this story starts out very slowly and picks up speed only after Harry arrives in the past. Once there, the story becomes one of the very best I've ever read, on par with all of
the other good ones presented on this site network.
Due to the approach, I guess there is little to be done about the initial amount of excitement your story causes. It works extremely well in hindsight, but it makes this first chapter fall just short
of excellent. Maybe you should label it as prologue, since its function is really only to get the story rolling. Your objective here is to hold the readers initial attention long enough to get to the
good stuff. Of course, just being on this site network is probably the best kind of recommendation you can get! ^_^
It's not quite THAT bad, but due to the skeletal structure of this story (about which I don't think you can do anything, unless you strip the whole story apart), this chapter isn't really quite as
good as the rest, albeit necessary.
Tell me what you think of my ramblings. ;)
Quizer
Fascinating and delightfully complex and convoluted start.
Brilliant!
Well, UPDATE THE DAMN STORY! It's really good. I found a couple of typos, but other than that, it's not that bad.
finish this!!!
Great story, been a fan of your's since FF.net. I have read reviews..not here..saying that this story reminds them of Rusbyte's Backwards Compatible fic, but I'm afraid I'll have to disagree. I've
just read that fic, and while it is noteworthy, it just doesn't stack up to yours. Great job so far. Hope you'll be able to post all your already done chapters in here soon...unless you're changing
some stuff..where I'll say; Don't change too much. Can't wait to see what you have coming next.
Mike....Big fan
I like. I hope that you choose to continue this.
Cool to see you are at Jeconais' website now. I've been reading this story over at ff.net but I like this site a lot better. And I absolutely love the idea behind your story! :D Hope you'll manage to transfer it completely and then update it soon! :)
Bob Joyce